Comet

Comet

My voice takes flight,
soaring on my breath,
and my very self
is caught up,
like the tail
of a comet,
released in a rapture
of adoration
(my body becoming a ghost
as everything fades
and we commingle
in a place that is not heaven
or earth
but You).

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  1. Damon's avatar Damon says:

    Awesome.

    1. mrteague's avatar mrteague says:

      Awesome is the right word to describe worship! Thanks for reading & commenting πŸ™‚

      1. Damon's avatar Damon says:

        You bet. Blessing to you, Teague.

  2. Patrick's avatar Patrick says:

    Teague, You should put music to those words!

    1. mrteague's avatar mrteague says:

      Not a bad idea, Patrick! I’ll see if I get hit by any comets of inspiration πŸ˜‰

      1. Patrick's avatar Patrick says:

        If you write the song, I will do a painting inspired by the song.

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